Proms Poetry Competition: Ian McMillan, Jackie Kay
Ian McMillan, Jackie Kay and Judith Palmer are joined at Imperial College by the winning poets whose writing has been prompted by music at the 2016 Proms. Reader: Stella Gonet.
Judges Ian McMillan - poet and presenter of The Verb, Jackie Kay - Scottish Makar and Judith Palmer - director of The Poetry Society are joined on stage by the winning poets whose writing has been prompted by music from this year's Proms. The reader is Stella Gonet.
Winner over 18 Category: Anna Kisby Runners-up: Graham Burchell and John Scrivens
Winner 12-18: Lucy Thynne Runners-up: Katherine Spencer-Davis and Jason Khan
Lucy Thynne Juliet on water inspired by Tchaikovsky's Romeo and Juliet Fantasy Overture
a breath, and the notes fall on dark water,
hesitant at first, but then sailing, like pale
adjacent bodies rising on the blue hips of a
young girl. I think of this girl's heart, hollowed
by the hands of that man, careful as they carve it
to a canoe pushed out on to this ocean. Quavers
like geese follow as it skims, blemishing the
stillness for only a second, bending the air, a
perfect house made out of water. Somehow you never
think anything can hold you this tight by the ribs and
still breathe. In my mind I think of the couple, spools of
song pulsing beneath their boat, stellate and wet
against eyelids as it makes tracks like stains on my
skin, a journey with an end best left unsaid. I think of
that tiny fistful of love, of blood feuds, of that
girl running in from blue coldness, only to meet
her crescendo, accelerando,
fine.
Anna Kisby Fireflies Unlimited inspired by Steve Reich's Vermont Counterpoint
We're in the half-built house
in Vermont - me and the man
I nearly marry, but don't - unroofed, holes
where windows will fit. In sleeping bags
on untreated boards, night falls and fireflies
arrive - a quickstep, a certainty, a flute added to
flute they synchronise. This was the dreamtime,
the simple time, that time between schooldays
and real life. Do you remember such a time
of firsts? We were living hand to mouth -
dollars counted into palms,
money soft as moth-wings.
In those days we went looking
for what we didn't know was there.
Our reward: fireflies without borders -
un-tame, a coming-together-last-minute plan.
We watch them sandpaper the sky, they jerk for joy,
they jagger, god's own migraine. In lightning-tongue
they sing to us Forget your sad cities of light, we are
our own ferris wheels. Now the roof must be on,
the forest cleared for lawn, each patio slab
a square of extinguished light. Anytime I want
I can catch them there, fireflies in a jar -
a torch-full of past, banging at the sides of this glass.
Producer: Fiona McLean.
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Winner 19+ Category: Anna Kisby - Fireflies Unlimited
Inspired by Steve ReichÌý-ÌýVermont Counterpoint
We’re in the half-built house
in Vermont – me and the man
I nearly marry, but don’t – unroofed, holes
where windows will fit. In sleeping bags
on untreated boards, night falls and fireflies
arrive – a quickstep, a certainty, a flute added to
flute they synchronise. This was the dreamtime,
the simple time, that time between schooldays
and real life. Do you remember such a time
of firsts? We were living hand to mouth –
dollars counted into palms,
money soft as moth-wings.
In those days we went looking
for what we didn’t know was there.
Our reward: fireflies without borders –
un-tame, a coming-together-last-minute plan.
We watch them sandpaper the sky, they jerk for joy,
they jagger, god’s own migraine. In lightning-tongue
they sing to us Forget your sad cities of light, we are
our own ferris wheels. Now the roof must be on,
the forest cleared for lawn, each patio slab
a square of extinguished light. Anytime I want
I can catch them there, fireflies in a jar –
a torch-full of past, banging at the sides of this glass.
Winner 12-18 Category: Lucy Thynne - Juliet on water
Inspired byÌýTchaikovsky’s Romeo and Juliet Fantasy Overture
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hesitant at first, but then sailing, like pale
adjacent bodies rising on the blue hips of a
young girl. I think of this girl’s
heart, hollowed
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to a canoe pushed out on to this ocean. Quavers
like geese follow as it skims, blemishing the
stillness for only a second, bending
the air, a
perfect house made out of water. Somehow you never Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý ÌýÌý
think anything can hold you this tight by the ribs and
still breathe. In my mind I think of the couple, spools ofÌýÌýÌýÌý
song pulsing beneath
their boat, stellate and wet
against eyelids as it makes tracks like stains on myÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌý ÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌý
skin, a journey with an end best left unsaid. I think of
that tiny fistful of love, of blood feuds, of that Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý
girl running in from blue
coldness, only to meetÌý
her crescendo, accelerando, Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý Ìý
fine.
Runner Up 19+ Category: Graham Burchell - Anti Mass
Inspired by Paul Dukas’ ballet La Peri - Poeme Danse
After an ageÌý one bird does cry out above this place
one in a rushÌýÌý passing overÌýÌý the aftertaste
is a pull of breeze through summer branchesÌý
and meÌý I’m sat in the ribcage of this gutted
roasted whale of a god houseÌý sat on the side
Ìý
where the bones are shatteredÌý
where all I can see of piety is a celtic crossÌý
a crying faceÌý where charcoal fragmentsÌý
ash and scorches have been air-brushedÌý
the altarÌý chapelsÌý and tracery windows
Ìý
have taken on wildflowersÌý here is airÌý
and shadow patternsÌý spaces for the unexpected
aerobatics of swallowsÌýÌýÌý
ÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌý hateÌý far offÌýÌýÌýÌý burned
another churchÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌýÌý a creator noticedÌý
saw the black char as emblematicÌý
Ìý
ripe for hanging from puppet wiresÌý ripe
for hanging like an explosionÌý held
at the midpoint of its momentÌý devoid
of sound and weightÌý dark light that beaconsÌý
beckons one to spear a thought
Runner Up 19+ Category: John Scrivens - Small Song for a Lark
Inspired byÌýRalph Vaughan Williams -ÌýThe Lark Ascending
I know this piece.Ìý I can recite each beat;
Time signatures I grasp but, even so,
These accidentals took so long to know,
And I have learned each triplet, each repeat.
I've practised long, would not admit defeat;
It does not matter that I will not shine;
The boring hours are gone, this piece is mine;
My fingers numb, my knowledge is complete.
Ìý
This hall is silent now, and every eye
Is on the baton raised.Ìý Pause.Ìý Begin,
And deftly, quietly, launch this small bird's flight;
The melody surrounds me, fills my sky;
The lark ascends, the gentle sun pours in;
Discard the page: the day is filled with light.
Runner Up 12-18 Category: Katherine Spencer-Davis - Live Another Day
Inspired by Mark Simpson -ÌýIsrafel
She is dying,
She can feel it, quick and sudden and far too loud,
Ìý
She is running –
Run, little girl, run –
Faster, faster, faster,
Skeleton soaring, bones come to life.
Ìý
Her heart is pounding –
Run, little girl, run –
Death is chasing you,
Death is catching you.
Ìý
She can’t slow down, never slower –
Run, little girl, run –
I am here, I will help you,
Just don’t stop moving.
Ìý
A twig cracks beneath her –
Run, little girl, run –
She is looking behind and death’s
Red eyes are gleaming.
Ìý
She is tired, throat is closing –
Run, little girl, run –
You will be clean, I will wash
My hands in your blood.
Ìý
She is close, closer, quickly –
Keep running, little girl, keep running –
Ìý
You are here; you have escaped.
Runner Up 12-18 Category: Jason Khan - The Church of Self-destruction and the Worship of Evergreen Release
Inspired byÌýDavid Bowie -ÌýAshes to Ashes
ÌýI stumble through Tokyo alleys,
With the sound of mid-life karaoke humming
In the narcotic night nitrogen,
Sinking into effervescent coma
Induced by Japanese Geishas in neon bliss,
Prosecco pouring from my earholes,
As ascension elixirs enters my saturnine veins,
And emerald halos cycle the crows
While they pick on tie-wearing carrion;
I shake with pre-meditated self-grief,
Glass teardrops pirouetting at my transparent sides,
The Dawn shattering through my Bakelite eyelids;
Falling to my knees, I, unravelled and extinguished,
Drift off to inner space writhing
And whispering. ‘Mother, I’m sorry.’
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