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David Hollis
David Hollis

My name is David Hollis I was an engineer in the Merchant Navy, now retired at 65. I am interested in local history and belong to a cross community group. I am married with 3 children and 4 grandchildren. Live in Newtownabbey.

At the Doctor's Surgery by David Hollis
"Ach Mary how are you doing? it's a long time since I last saw you. I'm here to try and get nerve tablets, as you know I never had anything wrong with my nerves till I heard about our Wilma's man. Why whats wrong Masie is he dead as well?, dead, dead did you say, have you not heard it's the talk of the whole road, sure you must have heard all about it?. Honest to God Masie i haven't heard a thing. Well let me tell you what he's up to and our dear Wilma not even dead a year until easter, God rest her soul.

Last week when I was coming out of the co-op I met Lizzy Colhoun an she couldn't tell me soon enough about Willy McIlroy and his exploits. She said that he was beating about with Sadie McDyer from the top of the road, do you remember her?, I know the name but can't place her, well her da was Arter McDyer who used to keep the pigs in a yard down behind the wee gospel hall, the men all said he had a bottom lip like a pigeons lighting board. Sadie McDyer used to help him collect skins to feed the pigs, sure she was never at school. Ach I know who you are talking about now, you would think butter wouldn't melt in her mouth. Lizzy Colhoun told me that she seen the pair of them in Castle Court last friday, she said that she had to look twice to make sure she wasn't seeing things, she was holding his arm and he was carrying her shopping bags. Masie thats awful, you would think that he could of waited a wee while longer about going with another woman. Woman said Masie she is not a woman, nothing but a money grabber, i could tell you that within six months she will be on the arm of somebody else's man. God rest our Wilma's soul, she would turn in her grave if she thought that Sadie McDyer was going in and out of her wee house, and she had it like a wee palace.

Well, Lizzy said she followed them out of Castle Court, well not followed but was behind them and she thought they were heading for the bus, but no, they walked into the Deer's Head pub, and you know when our Wilma was living she never set her foot over the door of a pub. Willy McIlroy would come home from the shipyard every friday with his paypacket never opened and our Wilma would give him 10 bob for to go and see the blues on a saturday, other than that he never crossed the door. As you know the only other time they went out was the twelth fortnight to Millisle in Billy Rodgers caravan for a wee holiday, they went every year. Now, Lizzy said that at 9 a clock they where both staggering up the road and that they went into his house together. I never asked her how she knew that, as I was mortified. My Albert went round the next day to ask him what he was playing at". Just then my name was called to go into see the doctor and I never knew the end of the story about Willie and Sadie from up the road.


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