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Debra Lilley
Debra Lilley

Debra was originally from Gloucester and now lives in Ballynure, Co Antrim with her husband John, 15 year old daughter Brooke and two dogs. She is an IT Consultant. Her story was written at the Grove Leisure centre whilst her daughter was at swimming training. Interests are ferrying the daughter around (where most time is spent), dressmaking and struggling with a part time diploma.

The Flight's Delayed by Debra Lilley

Never mind, he like all those who flew regularly was used to that.

He looked around the departure lounge. A priest raised a silent prayer, and a mother of two small children, muttered her prayer aloud.

Business men around the room, like a Mexican wave, spoke into their mobiles, re-arranging their schedules.

As time moved on, people began to travel the road from resignment to resentment, some got up to demand an explanation whilst others moaned loudly into their phones or to those around them.

He first spotted her sat in a corner, a large man to her left appeared to be shouting at no-one, his 'hands free' kit lost in the folds of his jacket. It seemed as if she was on her own, in a cocoon of uncertainty, looking so lost, so quiet, so fragile.

After 4 hours laptops had lost power, phones would soon join this slow death of the mobile office, mourned loudly by increasingly angry, frustrated business travellers, ranting the mantra of 'Time is Money'. The airline simply repeated their announcements.

'Flight FY432 to New York is delayed pending clarification of a possible terrorist alert, next information in 30 minutes'.

He moved towards her, smiling. 'Such a pain' he said as he sat down beside her, 'I'm supposed to be doing a job in New York'. She was to visit her brother in New York.

By tea time, the business travellers had on the whole simply given up and gone home. A harassed airline employee was trying to pacify the two small children while the mother went for a calming walk. They were flying out to join her husband who had gone on ahead their new home.

The priest looked as if his faith had been lost. How many unanswered prayers can one man take?

That evening after 9 hours the flight was finally cancelled. As moans subsided the airline representative advised that those who wanted to try again tomorrow would be accommodated in a local hotel.

'What shall I do?' she asked him. 'Come on, let's make it an adventure, Good hotel, good food and someone else's money' he reasoned. 'What about your work?' she asked, and he explained it could wait.

After helping her to her room with her luggage, he went to his own room and rang his employer. They agreed too much planning had gone on to cancel his trip.

He arranged to meet her in the restaurant. As he was travelling business class the airline were being very generous. She looked lovely by candlelight, more perfect, like a china doll, something to hold and admire. Afterwards they retired to the bar.

He smiled to himself, and she asked why. 'I'm a busy person', he explained, 'I never get the chance to socialise yet alone meet a beautiful girl like you'. She looked away, almost as quickly as the colour grew in her cheeks, but he reached out and touched her face gently, turning her head back towards him where he gently kissed her on the forehead.

Later he walked her back to her room and arranged to meet her for breakfast.

The morning sun streamed in through the large windows, lighting up her face. Her spirit too was lifted as they resolved to enjoy this day, whatever.

Only 80 of the original 400 passengers were there only to be told the flight would not leave before lunchtime. They sat down and for the next few hours were oblivious to the ranting and moaning around them as they continued to tell each other about themselves.

Another 4 hour delay was announced and the airline arranged a coach to take them into the local town. They watched the priest lead the young mother into a cinema with the promise of two hours peace, and popcorn for the children.

Walking around the shops, aware only of each other, he took her hand and they looked every inch the perfect couple. She a young graduate, and he, although only a few years older, the more mature, protective, man of the world. They went into a small tea shop and as he held he hand ever more tightly he asked if she believed in fate, in love at first sight.

The trip away from the airport had raised the mood. Most people were upbeat and someone even dared to voice an opinion that they would rather be delayed than ignore a terrorist alert. Then the airline shattered the optimism with a simple statement announcing the threat continued.

There was another problem, now 2 flights had been cancelled and tomorrows could not take them all. The airline offered a cash incentive for people to wait 2 days.

'Let's take it' he said quickly, she was not so sure but soon agreed. That evening he told her he loved her.

The next day they went back to the town and as they walked past an antique shop; he got down on one knee and asked her to marry him. She was blown away, but again soon persuaded that if fate was on their side it was meant to be. She was so happy, this was a fairy tale, someone with a good job, money, looks, everything, loved her, a timid, country mouse who even after 4 years at university still didn't know what she wanted and even if she did, would never have the nerve to go and get it. The Victorian ring he spent the airlines money on was just perfect.

That night she stayed in his room and sealed their engagement.

At check in the next day, she could not have been happier, she went off through the economy gate safe in the knowledge that she would meet up with him again on the plane.

But he never got on the plane, how could he do this to the girl he loved?

How couldn't go ahead and blow up the plane. Perhaps the priest's prayers were answered after all.


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