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16 October 2014
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Ellie Rose McKee
Ellie Rose McKee

I'm at the start of my career as a writer. Originally from Bangor I've recently moved back here after spending 3 years in Lincoln. Slightly eccentric with a great love of animals, song lyrics and firm handshakes, I'm not your average girl.

I Can鈥檛 Feel the Rain by Ellie Rose McKee

I can鈥檛 feel the rain Even though it鈥檚 flowing
I can鈥檛 feel the rain
Even though it鈥檚 showing

I can see the droplets
Reflecting in the light
I can see the puddles
Rippling in the night

I can even hear it
The patter all around
But I can鈥檛 feel the rain
Regardless of the sound

Is it that I鈥檓 numb?
...bizarre? or just don鈥檛 care?
About this I am clueless
to guess I would not dare
All I know is this...

I can鈥檛 feel the rain
But I know it鈥檚 there


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